#11 Hawk’s Eye’s Dream Target

Due to some confusion over the original comic, below is an alternate ending. Click here for the original ending. Enjoy :)

MoonSticks Sailor Moon Comic/Doujinshi #11 - Hawkseye's Dream Target featuring The Amazon Trio Hawkseye, Tigerseye and Fisheye

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Narrator: The Amazon Trio plan their next target at the bar.
Hawk's Eye: We all know the older, mature women make best targets. They're so much more sexy.

Fish Eye: Ohhh.. Let me see let me see!
[[Fish Eye and Tiger Eye gather around Hawk's Eye, who is holding a photo]]
Hawk's Eye: Ah, this one is perrfect.
Tiger's Eye: You sure have bad taste! Little girls are better!

[[Hawk's Eye turns away]]
Hawk's Eye (thinking): *smirk* Hmph, we'll see about that. Just watch me.

Narrator: A few hours later..
Hawk's Eye: WTF? She's already dead.
Tiger's Eye: Aww, by old age?
Fish Eye: Well there goes her dream mirror!

88 Responses to “#11 Hawk’s Eye’s Dream Target”

  1. Sakura August 22, 2014 at 11:42 am #

    I understand the original ending, but don’t understand the edited one. So they photo shopped a picture to look like a sexy old woman but actually she was really old

    • Chibi Jennifer September 1, 2014 at 3:10 pm #


      • sailor galifrey February 25, 2015 at 4:49 pm #

        can you please not use cuss words or say sexy cuz if my mom see that she may not let me read moon sticks anymore

        • Chibi Jennifer February 26, 2015 at 11:38 am #

          Just wondering, how old are you? :)

          • sailor galifrey February 27, 2015 at 3:31 pm #

            i’m not allwoded to tell people on the internet my age srry

          • sailor galifrey February 27, 2015 at 5:11 pm #

            I show my mom the coments and she said I could say 12
            i also show her the comic and she just lafed and said she loves me

  2. pikachu jigglypuff June 27, 2014 at 7:13 am #

    What would happen if he went after a baby?

  3. Chronos Typhoon! I heart Set-chan! April 21, 2011 at 4:46 am #

    OMG! I love your fan art as much as I love Sailor Pluto! And I’m planing to be Sailor Pluto for Halloween!

  4. Starlight January 25, 2011 at 9:48 am #

    I hate 2 say this, but poor Hawke-eye.

  5. Daenerys December 13, 2010 at 11:39 pm #

    I honestly can’t say which one is better. They both made me laugh so hard. xD

  6. Sailor Sun October 24, 2010 at 10:48 am #


    wait …..

    if .. before that old lady died……….lol pfffft

    HOW would she be sexier??!! XD lol

  7. MizzDorkiie August 13, 2010 at 12:10 pm #

    OH! I get it! xD ahahah~

  8. MizzDorkiie August 13, 2010 at 12:10 pm #

    I don’t get it… I think…

  9. bunnychan August 3, 2010 at 4:23 am #

    I like the orignal ending a little bit better.

  10. Sailor Music June 25, 2010 at 8:46 am #

    Oh! I get the alternate ending! It took me a while, but I got it!

  11. Kibou no Hikari October 3, 2009 at 1:43 pm #

    Poor Hawk’s Eye. This is why we never go for older women! And someone needs to update the pictures of the Amazon Trio’s targets, don’t they? Amazing job!

    • Chibi Jennifer October 3, 2009 at 3:27 pm #

      hahah Zircon-Eye thingy takes too many pics XD You may as well just walk down the street and take pictures yourself, lol.

  12. Caroline September 26, 2009 at 3:06 pm #

    Ahaaa, Fish-Eye looks so cute on this comic.

  13. Leo July 25, 2009 at 1:29 pm #

    “little girls are better!” lol epic foreshadowing! lol great job! your hilarious!

  14. Vivien July 18, 2009 at 10:00 am #

    Haha… Hawks-Eye.
    I question his taste for older women too… haha.

  15. Peter June 21, 2009 at 12:55 pm #

    Hahahaha I like both versions! I especially LOL’ed at the photoshop comment in the alternate and in this version, I figured it was an old picture lol.

  16. Lu June 12, 2009 at 4:14 am #

    I got it! I enjoyed this comic. I reallyed liked SuperS, despite what everyone says. Its possibly my 3rd favorite out of all of them. S and Stars are gems in my eyes though.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 12, 2009 at 6:40 pm #

      aww, that’s great! S and Stars are also my fav =) SuperS isn’t as bad as many make it out to be.. S and Stars are just more superior!

  17. pinkbubblesnake June 8, 2009 at 8:39 am #

    XD. I like this ending better!

  18. jade June 8, 2009 at 2:37 am #

    so cool.can you make one of the amazoness quartet next time? pretty please with a cherry on top

    • Chibi Jennifer June 8, 2009 at 10:57 am #

      Don’t worry! I intend to cover as many characters as possible in MoonSticks :)
      Just keep following and they’ll appear one day ^_^

      Thanks for being so enthusiastic :D

  19. Jacky June 7, 2009 at 10:14 am #

    lol, gota love the WTF

  20. Heather ~ Luna-chan June 7, 2009 at 8:40 am #

    I liked both ^^ poor Hawkseye… ;3

  21. Travis June 6, 2009 at 6:47 pm #

    Haha nice! Though I like the original ending better XD though this one is funny too.

  22. Sailor Gold Rabbit June 6, 2009 at 1:15 pm #

    ^_^ The alternate ending is funny too!

  23. Dominique June 6, 2009 at 1:04 pm #

    Aw, I get it and it’s funny! Poor Hawkeye got scammed.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 11:57 pm #

      yay! Another one who gets it ^.^

      Yea.. Hawkseye gets it bad in both of the endings!

  24. hellowonderland June 6, 2009 at 12:22 pm #

    I like this one much better~ I didn’t quite get the punchline of the earlier version.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 11:55 pm #

      Glad the second one made more sense to you! As long as people like ONE of the two, I’m happy :D

  25. DrummerChick June 6, 2009 at 10:30 am #

    ROFL!!! Perfect ending! This one makes more sense lol!
    “She’s already dead” Lol! ^___^ Very nice!

  26. Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 8:59 am #

    I’ve posted up an alternate ending for those who were a bit confused with the original one. Hope you like this :)

  27. DrummerChick June 6, 2009 at 8:24 am #

    It does! It makes so much more sense now lol!

    Keep up the great work! :D

  28. Sailor Sun June 6, 2009 at 8:19 am #

    AAAAH, ok I get it now
    Thanks and sorry again ^_^;

  29. pinkbubblesnake June 6, 2009 at 8:13 am #

    I thought it was that someone had put up a false picture of themself ^_^’ .

  30. Sub Zippo June 6, 2009 at 8:12 am #

    I dont get the last one… what, was the target supposed to be really old, older than in the picture?

    • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 8:15 am #

      Both! The photograph of the target was an older women (which he likes), but in person she was a lot older, so really old.. and older than in the picture.

      The last frame was left quite ambiguous so you can interpret it in anyway you want, really =) Hope this clears it up!

      • Sailor Gold Rabbit June 6, 2009 at 8:19 am #

        Oh! That’s what you meant? Wow. I interpreted it way differently than that!

        • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 8:21 am #

          oh really? haha..that’s okay- as long as you interpreted something from it :)

          What was your version?

          • Sailor Gold Rabbit June 6, 2009 at 1:11 pm #

            My version was that Hawkseye’s victim ended up being much younger than he expected. Like, a ten year old that had put a random picture of an older woman on the Internet to convice people that she’s really an adult, which is why they should all take her Edward Cullen obsession seriously.

            I’m not ten, btw. Nor do I like Twilight. ^_^;

          • Chibi Jennifer June 7, 2009 at 12:03 am #

            LOL! That’s pretty funny XD And it can actually work!! O______O He comes back traumatised by a little girl, and TigerEye teases him saying “I thought you liked older women” in other words… why did you go for a kid? XD

            Hawkseyes gets pwned either way so if it works for you, it works!! =D haha!

  31. Sailor Sun June 6, 2009 at 8:11 am #

    I’m so much sorry!!T_T
    I didn’t really get it.. :(
    Is it that Hawkseye was deceived by the picture?
    I think it is me the reason. I may just need more explanation about it -_-

    AND, I’ve watched this season. Although I didn’t like it a lot (I mean Sailor Moon S is better for me) I really love the trio. They are the best. because of them sailor Moon SS is acceptable. Other things are somehow boring..

    Sailor stars and Super is the best for me + I love Saphir and Dimando^^

    • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 8:18 am #

      aww, it’s okay Sailor Sun ^_^ This comic was left ambiguous in the end so it may have caused some confusion.. Yes, Hawkseye was deceived by the photo, and it’s hinted that she was really old..much older than in the photo so he comes back quite traumatised. TigerEye is just having a big laugh at him ^^; Maybe he pulled a prank.

  32. Lady Hazel June 6, 2009 at 8:09 am #

    Comics are funny and the drawings are adorable. <3

  33. tru0001 June 5, 2009 at 10:44 pm #

    I haven’t seen that season yet. Let alone anything beyond Rini finding out Serena is Sailor Moon (I watched the dubbed version)…. but I’ll just laugh and pretend to know what it means. I love the combination between the technology back then to now.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 10:46 pm #

      aww, that’s a shame too! I know how you feel! I remember watching the English dub too back in the young days and they cut off just when they got to the most exciting part! Then ages later in Aussie TV they started putting the rest of R season.. but it didn’t make much sense cause Rubeus was already gone and it was showing Emerald and Saphir ^^;

      Nevertheless, thanks for reading ^_^

  34. KTVB June 5, 2009 at 9:45 pm #

    lol! This one’s pretty cute XD I don’t really remember much of the amazon trio’s targets- except fisheye goes for guys yeh?

    Hawk Eye is funny~ he really probably does have bad taste!

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 10:37 pm #

      teeeheee..yesh, Fisheye is the most memorable out of the three ^_^ They’re so funny and silly together! One is a homosexual, one is a cougar and one is a pedo..LOL. All exaggerated to the extremes, of course, ehheh!

  35. Kressa June 5, 2009 at 12:08 pm #

    cougar!! :P

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 12:17 pm #

      ahaha yeh… though you gotta wonder how old Hawskeye is ^^; There was actually an alternate ending I had in mind for this one.. cougar taken to the extreme XD.. Hawkseye ends up at the funeral to realise she died of old age recently.

      • Kressa June 5, 2009 at 1:48 pm #

        now i know funerals are nothing to laugh at, but the concept just made me lmao XD

        • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 10:38 pm #

          I wonder if it was the right decision to use this ending instead? hmm.. ^_^

          • kressa June 11, 2009 at 3:21 pm #

            nothing wrong with this ending. sometimes you just have to learn to laugh and know the difference between poking fun and being serious.

          • Chibi Jennifer June 11, 2009 at 3:24 pm #

            Well I guess the alternate ending is now used ^_^
            Its just a bit of dilemma wondering which ending is funnier (or which one the viewers would respond more to)

  36. Brad June 5, 2009 at 10:46 am #

    I love it! Would like to see more of the side characters actually!

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 11:17 am #

      aw, thanks =) it’s good to know the minor/side/villain characters are still loved! I’ll probably throw in a villain one after every 4-5 comics :) Still quite a few main characters who have yet to appear ;)

      • Sailor Sun June 6, 2009 at 8:17 am #

        What I love about Sailor Moon that even villains, who are evil and shouldn’t be loved, are lovely, charming, funny and some are so cute (like Iron Mouse^^) and you feel sorry when they die ;)

        • Chibi Jennifer June 6, 2009 at 8:20 am #

          Couldn’t agree more with you :) It’s especially heart-warming when they turn good too..and realise they were only used all along. If they villains weren’t treated so badly they would have succeeded a lot more (like how FishEye, Siren, Nephrite knew the identities of the Sailor Soldiers- but was killed)

  37. tvreflection June 5, 2009 at 9:12 am #

    I LOVE IT :D
    yes x 1000 for the amazon trio ♥

  38. Elly June 5, 2009 at 8:56 am #

    OMG YEEEES. This was amazing. <3

  39. black_sonnet June 5, 2009 at 7:25 am #

    XD fabby as usual~

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 10:05 am #

      hehe, thanks black_sonnet! Since many don’t seem to like SuperS very much, I wondered if this comic will be liked as much as the other ones.

      • Brad June 5, 2009 at 10:44 am #

        Nah, people just say that to be cool. Everyone secretly likes SuperS. ;)

  40. Sailor Gold Rabbit June 5, 2009 at 7:04 am #

    Hehehe! That’s brilliant! Poor Hawkseye, though.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 5, 2009 at 7:05 am #

      Wow! That was quick! I only posted it 4 minutes ago XD

      Thank you! ^.^

      • Sailor Gold Rabbit June 5, 2009 at 7:31 am #

        Really? Wow!

        De nada! ^.^

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