#11 Hawk’s Eye’s Dream Target

Due to some confusion over the original comic, below is an alternate ending. Click here for the original ending. Enjoy :)

MoonSticks Sailor Moon Comic/Doujinshi #11 - Hawkseye's Dream Target featuring The Amazon Trio Hawkseye, Tigerseye and Fisheye

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Narrator: The Amazon Trio plan their next target at the bar.
Hawk's Eye: We all know the older, mature women make best targets. They're so much more sexy.

Fish Eye: Ohhh.. Let me see let me see!
[[Fish Eye and Tiger Eye gather around Hawk's Eye, who is holding a photo]]
Hawk's Eye: Ah, this one is perrfect.
Tiger's Eye: You sure have bad taste! Little girls are better!

[[Hawk's Eye turns away]]
Hawk's Eye (thinking): *smirk* Hmph, we'll see about that. Just watch me.

Narrator: A few hours later..
Hawk's Eye: WTF? She's already dead.
Tiger's Eye: Aww, by old age?
Fish Eye: Well there goes her dream mirror!

88 Responses to “#11 Hawk’s Eye’s Dream Target”

  1. Sakura August 22, 2014 at 11:42 am #

    I understand the original ending, but don’t understand the edited one. So they photo shopped a picture to look like a sexy old woman but actually she was really old

    • Chibi Jennifer September 1, 2014 at 3:10 pm #


      • sailor galifrey February 25, 2015 at 4:49 pm #

        can you please not use cuss words or say sexy cuz if my mom see that she may not let me read moon sticks anymore

        • Chibi Jennifer February 26, 2015 at 11:38 am #

          Just wondering, how old are you? :)

          • sailor galifrey February 27, 2015 at 3:31 pm #

            i’m not allwoded to tell people on the internet my age srry

          • sailor galifrey February 27, 2015 at 5:11 pm #

            I show my mom the coments and she said I could say 12
            i also show her the comic and she just lafed and said she loves me

  2. pikachu jigglypuff June 27, 2014 at 7:13 am #

    What would happen if he went after a baby?

  3. Chronos Typhoon! I heart Set-chan! April 21, 2011 at 4:46 am #

    OMG! I love your fan art as much as I love Sailor Pluto! And I’m planing to be Sailor Pluto for Halloween!

  4. Starlight January 25, 2011 at 9:48 am #

    I hate 2 say this, but poor Hawke-eye.

  5. Daenerys December 13, 2010 at 11:39 pm #

    I honestly can’t say which one is better. They both made me laugh so hard. xD

  6. Sailor Sun October 24, 2010 at 10:48 am #


    wait …..

    if .. before that old lady died……….lol pfffft

    HOW would she be sexier??!! XD lol

  7. MizzDorkiie August 13, 2010 at 12:10 pm #

    OH! I get it! xD ahahah~

  8. MizzDorkiie August 13, 2010 at 12:10 pm #

    I don’t get it… I think…

  9. bunnychan August 3, 2010 at 4:23 am #

    I like the orignal ending a little bit better.

  10. Sailor Music June 25, 2010 at 8:46 am #

    Oh! I get the alternate ending! It took me a while, but I got it!

  11. Kibou no Hikari October 3, 2009 at 1:43 pm #

    Poor Hawk’s Eye. This is why we never go for older women! And someone needs to update the pictures of the Amazon Trio’s targets, don’t they? Amazing job!

    • Chibi Jennifer October 3, 2009 at 3:27 pm #

      hahah Zircon-Eye thingy takes too many pics XD You may as well just walk down the street and take pictures yourself, lol.

  12. Caroline September 26, 2009 at 3:06 pm #

    Ahaaa, Fish-Eye looks so cute on this comic.

  13. Leo July 25, 2009 at 1:29 pm #

    “little girls are better!” lol epic foreshadowing! lol great job! your hilarious!

  14. Vivien July 18, 2009 at 10:00 am #

    Haha… Hawks-Eye.
    I question his taste for older women too… haha.

  15. Peter June 21, 2009 at 12:55 pm #

    Hahahaha I like both versions! I especially LOL’ed at the photoshop comment in the alternate and in this version, I figured it was an old picture lol.

  16. Lu June 12, 2009 at 4:14 am #

    I got it! I enjoyed this comic. I reallyed liked SuperS, despite what everyone says. Its possibly my 3rd favorite out of all of them. S and Stars are gems in my eyes though.

    • Chibi Jennifer June 12, 2009 at 6:40 pm #

      aww, that’s great! S and Stars are also my fav =) SuperS isn’t as bad as many make it out to be.. S and Stars are just more superior!

  17. pinkbubblesnake June 8, 2009 at 8:39 am #

    XD. I like this ending better!

  18. jade June 8, 2009 at 2:37 am #

    so cool.can you make one of the amazoness quartet next time? pretty please with a cherry on top

    • Chibi Jennifer June 8, 2009 at 10:57 am #

      Don’t worry! I intend to cover as many characters as possible in MoonSticks :)
      Just keep following and they’ll appear one day ^_^

      Thanks for being so enthusiastic :D

  19. Jacky June 7, 2009 at 10:14 am #

    lol, gota love the WTF

  20. Heather ~ Luna-chan June 7, 2009 at 8:40 am #

    I liked both ^^ poor Hawkseye… ;3

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